Jude wakes to the bill for his sins - circa seventy thousand pounds. Across Tokyo, Bells discovers what she's been carrying. Some things, once said, don't just wash out.
Oh Bells. Absolute queen behaviour. Weaponised expense account. Emotional terrorism via helicopter tour. Solving the security question by correctly identifying that this emotionally constipated man’s deepest vulnerability is, in fact, her. I was CACKLING. Klar, this is beautiful. 💜
I was always puzzled Jude got such a negative reception here. The man is a mush under all that pretense 🤣 Just watch how he follows her around like a kicked puppy for the next two chapters. I enjoyed writing these A LOT 🤣
Right! This chapter had me seriously wondering whether he has some sort of personality disorder, where he doesnt remember stuff he’s done or isnt fully in control of what he does… kind of like the Hulk…
This is top tier show-don’t-tell: Bells figuring out all of Jude’s security questions including the last one! She knows the man inside out and yet, a gulf between them. And of course, I very much appreciated the maths you did on Jude’s average length of sleep.
I’ve always meant to ask you: are you the Klar in the team? I’m Bela the Koi fish in SaaK 😂.
Of course, the man's tracking his daily stats for optimal performance (he figured 5 hours a night is just about enough while granting additional time for work 😏) And yes - that is me! I don't think I got to the Koi fish section yet - will be there very soon 🥰
Oh Bells. Absolute queen behaviour. Weaponised expense account. Emotional terrorism via helicopter tour. Solving the security question by correctly identifying that this emotionally constipated man’s deepest vulnerability is, in fact, her. I was CACKLING. Klar, this is beautiful. 💜
I was always puzzled Jude got such a negative reception here. The man is a mush under all that pretense 🤣 Just watch how he follows her around like a kicked puppy for the next two chapters. I enjoyed writing these A LOT 🤣
Right! This chapter had me seriously wondering whether he has some sort of personality disorder, where he doesnt remember stuff he’s done or isnt fully in control of what he does… kind of like the Hulk…
Hahaha nah in his head it all follows a certain twisted logic. I shall try to shed some light on that soon 🤭
This is top tier show-don’t-tell: Bells figuring out all of Jude’s security questions including the last one! She knows the man inside out and yet, a gulf between them. And of course, I very much appreciated the maths you did on Jude’s average length of sleep.
I’ve always meant to ask you: are you the Klar in the team? I’m Bela the Koi fish in SaaK 😂.
Of course, the man's tracking his daily stats for optimal performance (he figured 5 hours a night is just about enough while granting additional time for work 😏) And yes - that is me! I don't think I got to the Koi fish section yet - will be there very soon 🥰